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The Pretty Little Moon

Smothered by the clouds,
Out-shined by the sun,
Thereโ€™s the pretty little moon,
Who smiles through it all.

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Amidst trillions of stars,
Who mock her for being alone,
The pretty little moon,
Stays strong through it all.

She’s taunted for her marks,
Reminded of her flaws,
The pretty little moon,
Tries to unhear them all.

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Some days she goes red with rage,
The fury burning within her,
The pretty little moon,
Knows how to put up a show.

Some days the darkness eats her up,
So deeply; she turns invisible,
Yet the pretty little moon,
Appears again with a crescent smile.

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Yet again she bestows upon us,
Her soothing radiant light,
The pretty little moon,
Knows what sheโ€™s worth.

Note: This poem for NaPoRiMo Day Six. And while you may wonder where was the moon in the picture, she was there. She was out-shined by the sun, or maybe, the darkness ate her up, but she was there, just feel her presence.
Also, I didn’t follow the prompt on Day 5. It was too complicated and I’m still working on it. Nevertheless, I wrote something yesterday (not based on the prompt), check it out!

Featured image by:ย luizclasย fromย Pexels

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  1. Aanchal Avatar

    You are amazing, this was so beautifully penned!๐Ÿ’ž

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Aanchal! ๐Ÿ’• I’m so happy that you liked it! โฃ๏ธ

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Super late thank you, king!

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you Haroon! ๐Ÿ’•

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      1. Haroon Mirza Avatar

        You’re welcome

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        โฃ๏ธ

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  2. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

    My favourite object in the sky is the moon.
    Your beautiful poem captures the uniqueness of the moon I always felt within myself.

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      The Moon is pretty indeed! And my favorite too. It just has such a beautiful soothing effect me. The Moon heals. ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ˜… And thank you so much. I’m so glad you liked it! โฃ๏ธ

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  3. Yacoob Avatar

    Lovely ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you Yacoob! โฃ๏ธ

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  4. Harsh Avatar

    Superb!!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Harsh๐Ÿ’•

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you Neha ๐Ÿ™ˆโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜

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      1. Neha nandwana Avatar

        โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ My pleasure ๐Ÿ’ ๐Ÿ’

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  5. Macrine Jangu Avatar

    This i such an amazing piece!

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Macrine โฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ’•

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      1. Macrine Jangu Avatar

        You welcome

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  6. Untold Stories Avatar

    How beautifully you put up the little moon….

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Rashmi ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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      1. Untold Stories Avatar

        Hey I invite you to check my recent post
        “Thank you bloggers” on my WordPress site.

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  7. Brad Osborne Avatar

    This is certainly one of your best, but that is just my opinion. The form is lovely, lyrical, and flowing. You paint the moon in such subtle shades and yet convey such a powerful message. The final line of each stanza returns us to the consistent and undying nature of the moon’s presence whether seen or unseen. This is a beautiful work of art! โค๐ŸŒ•โฃ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜˜

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Brad! ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•
      ๐ŸŒ™๐ŸŒ™โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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    2. SoundEagle ๐Ÿฆ…เณ‹แƒฆเฎœเฎ‡ Avatar

      Dear WildHeart,

      Greetings! I saw the full moon last night. I would like to concur with Brad Osborne’s earnest feedback. What a lovely and evocative poem you have composed about the little moon!

      It is clear that you show a great degree of enthusiasm towards, and affinity with, the moon and its own charm over perceptive observers.

      Therefore, SoundEagle would like to resonate with you and your poem by introducing you to the enchanting poems and images published in a post whose title is “If My Name Were Moon Tonightโ€ฆ”, which is quite comparable to yours named as “The Pretty Little Moon”.

      My said poem is available at https://soundeagle.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/if-my-name-were-moon-tonight/

      In addition, considering the relevance and quality of your poem, I have decided to hyperlink and mention your post in my said post.

      May you find April and the rest of the year very much to your liking and highly conducive to your writing, thinking and blogging!

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    3. SoundEagle ๐Ÿฆ…เณ‹แƒฆเฎœเฎ‡ Avatar

      Hello Dear WildHeart,

      Greetings! I saw the full moon last night. I would like to concur with Brad Osborne’s earnest feedback. What a lovely and evocative poem you have composed about the little moon!

      It is clear that you show a great degree of enthusiasm towards, and affinity with, the moon and its own charm over perceptive observers.

      Therefore, SoundEagle would like to resonate with you and your poem by introducing you to the enchanting poems and images published in a post whose title is “If My Name Were Moon Tonightโ€ฆ”, which is quite comparable to yours named as “The Pretty Little Moon”.

      My said poem is available at http://soundeagle.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/if-my-name-were-moon-tonight/

      In addition, considering the relevance and quality of your poem, I have decided to hyperlink and mention your post in my said post.

      May you find April and the rest of the year very much to your liking and highly conducive to your writing, thinking and blogging!

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      1. WildHeart Avatar

        Thank you so much dear!! This means so much to me. I’ll definitely check out your post.
        Loads of love to you. Take care & stay safe! โฃ๏ธ

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      2. SoundEagle ๐Ÿฆ…เณ‹แƒฆเฎœเฎ‡ Avatar

        You are very welcome, WildHeart! ๐Ÿ™‚

        I look forward to your visting and commenting on my moon poem. At the post, you’ll also be able to listen to a recording of my playing โ€œClair de Luneโ€, my own transcription of the famous Debussy’s solo piano piece for electronic organ. Please enjoy!

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  8. SumitOfficial Avatar

    You’re improving day by day. If you ask me what’s the best thing I love about your writing is your versatility.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Haha Sumit…. Thank youโฃ๏ธYou take me over the moon with your appreciation โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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      1. SumitOfficial Avatar

        You absolutely deserve that love. I mean it.

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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  9. Jay Bleu Avatar

    I love this… it makes me think… sometimes the darkness eats us and we want to hide. But we have to remind ourselves that our hiding is just temporary. In time, we need to come back to shine.

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      So true! We’ve all got good days and bad days. We just should try and not let the bad days weigh us down. ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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      1. Jay Bleu Avatar

        Ya. i think it’s OK to cry, as long as we get back up after. . .

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        True!! ๐Ÿ’ž

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      3. Jay Bleu Avatar

        Take Care Ms. WildHeart

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      4. WildHeart Avatar

        You too Jay Bleu! Take care & stay safe. โฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ’•

        Liked by 1 person

      5. Jay Bleu Avatar

        Trying to and staying sane ๐Ÿ™‚

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      6. WildHeart Avatar
  10. singhpiyush6089 Avatar

    This is great… Loved this poem!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much ๐Ÿ’•

      Liked by 1 person

  11. msfaroucheanshika Avatar

    I really relate to the pretty little moon! Amazingly penned!!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿค—

      Liked by 1 person

  12. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    Even the moon goes through cycles of highs and lows. Beautifully written. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Shweta! Take care & stay safeโฃ๏ธ

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        You’re more than welcome. You too! Stay safe, take care. ๐Ÿ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜โฃ๏ธ

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  13. Art_Nomison Avatar

    Now I love the moon after the wonderful poem.

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Moon is really pretty. I love it. It kinda calms me down! โฃ๏ธ

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      1. Art_Nomison Avatar

        Have never seen the night time that way..maybe its because I live in a town with all those city lights.

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Maybe … โฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ’•

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      3. Art_Nomison Avatar

        How comes you see the moon more often?

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  14. foxesandpoems Avatar

    This is so lovely. The title and sentiment is a whole mood! โ™ฅ๏ธ๐ŸŒ™

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much ๐Ÿ’•โค๏ธ The Moon is indeed lovely! ๐ŸŒ™

      Liked by 1 person

  15. bejamin4 Avatar

    So nice. I love that opening sentence. Had to read on after that!

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much!! I’m so glad you liked it โฃ๏ธ

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      1. bejamin4 Avatar

        You’re welcome. I did. A lot ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—โฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Sonia๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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  16. Chitraksh Ashray Avatar

    This is certainly a work of art!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Ashray!! This means so much to me. I’m so happy you liked it. ๐Ÿ’•โฃ๏ธ

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  17. SpiritedSoul Avatar

    Very lovely Wildheart โš˜๐ŸŒป

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear. You write lovely too. ๐Ÿ’•โค๏ธ๐ŸŒผ๐ŸŒป

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      1. SpiritedSoul Avatar

        Aww thank u so much doll๐Ÿ’œ๐ŸŒป

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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  18. anemptyjournal Avatar

    I absolutely love how this has been written. Beautiful poem!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much! Your appreciation means a lot to me. Keep reading and stay safe! โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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  19. dakshali27 Avatar

    I can really relate to that pretty little moon๐Ÿ˜…. You write so well dear !

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thanks a lot dear. So glad you could relate to this. Loads of love! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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      1. dakshali27 Avatar

        It’s my pleasure to find you so cute and humble !

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

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      3. dakshali27 Avatar

        ๐Ÿ˜‡

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      4. WildHeart Avatar

        ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ˜˜

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      5. dakshali27 Avatar

        ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜‹

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      6. WildHeart Avatar

        ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜‡

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  20. The Eclectic Contrarian Avatar

    Very awesome!

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much! โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ

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      1. The Eclectic Contrarian Avatar

        Youโ€™re very welcome!

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        ๐Ÿค—โ™ฅ๏ธ

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