Hitting the 180

Cold blanks approach us:
And it’s getting scary.
The silence, once used to be bliss,
Amidst our fiery passion,
Now it’s just stark cold,
Aftermath of our heated discussion
.
 
Oh dear, where did we go wrong?
When did we hit a 180?
Your beautiful brown eyes,
That held only love for me,
Now give me an icy stare,
Laced with pure rage, even hatred.

 
Your hands that touched me,
With the utmost tenderness,
Now land on me with such force,
That I lose consciousness.
When did you stop loving me?
Can we still be salvaged?

For NaPoRiMo Day Eight. We were required to use a line or even a word that stands out from tweet snippets.

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53 Comments Add yours

  1. This fictional too??

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      1. 𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋 says:

        I was wondering too, for a moment, since I read earlier about couples having difficulties being locked down together! I mean arguments etc, not necessarily abuse, although I know that has increased too.

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      2. Great. Good one. 😅

        Liked by 1 person

      3. WildHeart says:

        Thank you so much Bharath! 💕

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  2. Very powerfully expressed!!

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much dear! 🙈❣️💕💕🤗

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  3. Beautiful. Powerful. Bravo.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much dear. So sorry for not responding earlier. My notification system has some glitch, haven’t figured it out yet. Your appreciation means a lot to me. Thank you so much. Much love. ❤️

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  4. Oh dear, where did we go wrong?
    When did we hit a 180?
    Your beautiful brown eyes,
    That held only love for me,
    Now give me an icy stare,
    Laced with pure rage, even hatred.
     

    Your mind must be a terrific place, therefore your thoughts are intense……👍👍

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much Rashmi! I’m humbled by your kind words! 🙈🙈💕💕❣️🤗🤗🤗🤗

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      1. I am so fond of your writing I have talked about you in my recent blog…
        You should go to see it once…

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      2. WildHeart says:

        Thank you so so so much Rashmi. And did you know, most of your favourites are my favourites too. Seems like we have such a similar mind. Love you loads! ❣️❣️💕💕💕💕 Thank you for being my constant motivation! ❣️

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  5. Thanks for the read

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    1. WildHeart says:

      You may not have noticed, but I’m constant reader too. Maybe I’m slow, but I’ve been reading your works for a long time. And I love it. ❣️😍💕

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      1. This means a lot yaa…..a lot means a lot.❤️

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      2. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘❣️💕

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much Haroon! ❣️

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      1. Haroon Mirza says:

        You’re welcome

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  6. Brad Osborne says:

    Your subtle articulation of the pain is powerful. Spoken more in recognition than in fear, it allows the reader to install their own experiences and see themselves in a different light. Well written, dear friend! 🤗🥰❤

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much Brad!! 🙈🙈❣️

      Liked by 1 person

    1. WildHeart says:

      Indeed it is! 😔

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Navin says:

    I’m loving your writings…full of passion…you put your heart on them. This post shows beauty in sadness…💙

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  8. Amazing poetry. Loved it

    Liked by 1 person

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much Abhishek! 💕❣️

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  9. Aa'eedah says:

    “When did we hit a 180?
    Your beautiful brown eyes,
    That held only love for me,
    Now give me an icy stare,
    Laced with pure rage, even hatred.”

    Beautiful, poignant. ♥️

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much dear. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. 💕❣️❤️

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Aa'eedah says:

        ❤️🤗🤓

        Liked by 1 person

      2. WildHeart says:

        ❣️❤️

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  10. Beautifully penned! 🙂

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you Shweta! 💞❣️😘

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      1. Take care. 🙂

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      2. WildHeart says:

        You too. 💞💞❤️ Much love.

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  11. Tone says:

    Very nicely done! I love the versatility in your writing! 😍

    Liked by 1 person

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much dear. I’m humbled by your appreciation! 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘❣️❣️❣️💕💕❤️

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      1. Tone says:

        You’re very welcome! 😊👍🌟✨

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      2. WildHeart says:

        🙈💕💞❣️

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  12. I’m out of words now.
    How do you praise without words Shreya?

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Idk. That’s something only a master of words like yourself can figure out. 😅❣️❤️

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      1. Damn! Look who’s saying, believe me till now I only had one comrade blogger of mine, her name is Chandni Asnani.
        She is such a beautiful heart that she can rhyme anything and everything.

        I’ve been in touch with her since 2016 and after so many years you’re the second person whose poems I appreciate the most after Chandni.

        Believe me nothing could be better than this.

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      2. WildHeart says:

        Damn! This is such an honor. It’s feels as if a king took off his crown and put it on my head. 😅😅❣️❣️❤️🙈🙈🙈

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      3. You deserve that love. 😫🙏💓

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      4. WildHeart says:

        Thank you so much! 🙈🙈🙈

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      5. You should check out Chandni’s work and you’ll get to know why I say so. I guess you must have seen her around but here’s her site:

        https://twilightfirefly.com

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      6. WildHeart says:

        She’s indeed amazing 😍

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      7. I told you ☺

        Liked by 1 person

      8. WildHeart says:

        Yes, you did. ❣️

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  13. Great post! 🙏🏾

    Liked by 1 person

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much 💕

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