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The Call Of The Sea

I stood on the seashore,
Enjoying the cool breeze,
Gentle waves hitting my toes,
As if calling to my soul.

 
The whole experience was ethereal,
And I’m not talking about the beauty.
Something stirred within me,
The sea was calling me.

 
I was captivated right there,
The serenity enveloped me,
Called me to walk towards it,
Be one with the sea.

 
I was in a trance,
Walking deeper into it,
Half my body submerged,
It felt like going home.

 
The world around me disappeared,
It was only me and the sea;
The gentle wave and the cool breeze,
Said that’s where I’m supposed to be.

 
Then I felt a firm hand grab me,
Pulling me out of the sea,
Breaking that captivating trance.
Damn! That was scary!

For, Eugi’s weekly prompt: Captivating

Featured image by: StockSnap from Pixabay

Inspiration: Looe Beach Photo 2 by Dave

Responses

  1. Dave Avatar

    Thank you so much for this!! Wonderful post 😀

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you Dave. Your clicks somehow ignite my words. Really loved it!! 🙈❣️❣️

  2. Vats S.Shah Avatar

    Loved it ! This is really good!
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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Vats. I’ll definitely check it out. ❣️💕🤗

      1. Vats S.Shah Avatar

        Thank you a shoutout in one of your upcoming blog posts will be of a great help.

  3. farhad Kaiser Avatar

    WOW ! It’s amazing 💕

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much 💕

  4. msfaroucheanshika Avatar

    It’s beautiful!! Loved it!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much 💕🙈🤗

  5. Harsh Avatar

    This is amazing!!🧡

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Harsh ❣️💕

  6. Aa'eedah Avatar

    The way it progressed, reminded me of Disney’s Moana.😍

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by! Much love. ❣️💕💕😘🤗🤗

      1. Aa'eedah Avatar

        🤗🤗❤️❤️

  7. Brad Osborne Avatar

    This was captivating and ethereal. I could feel everything you described. The trance like call of the sea that cannot be refused makes for a dramatic tone, and your words weave a story that the reader must follow to the end. Well written, little one! ❤💕😘

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Brad!! Your appreciation keeps motivating me. 🙈💕💕💕❣️❣️❣️

  8. rishabh kumar Avatar

    beautiful yr👐🤞❣️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much 💕

  9. Untold Stories Avatar

    I was captivated right there,
    The serenity enveloped me,
    Called me to walk towards it,
    Be one with the sea.
     

    Out of the box as usual💛

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Rashmi. I’m so sorry for not responding sooner. Love you so much. ❤️

  10. Sonu Avatar

    Well the see called me this way many times, but you expressed it 👌

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Sonu! I’m glad you could relate to it. ❤️💕💕 Keep reading, stay safe and take care. 🤗🤗❣️

  11. Haroon Mirza Avatar

    Serene and captivating

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Haroon! ❣️❣️💕

      1. Haroon Mirza Avatar

        You’re always welcome my friend

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      🤗🤗🤗❣️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thanks a million dear ❣️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      🤗🤗❣️❤️💕

  12. Jay Bleu Avatar

    Watch out! This sounded scary reading it, LOL

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Haha! Thanks for the read. ❣️Did you enjoy it?

      1. Jay Bleu Avatar

        Yes but I’m glad you snapped out of it 😉 don’t want to see you drown! Plus sharks. . . riptides. . .

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Haha!! Nothing would happen to me. I’m a mermaid! 🤪😉😉

      3. Jay Bleu Avatar

        Oh OK, I didn’t know that. But now I do, so I won’t worry for you. But I heard Mermaids are dangerous, themselves.

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Haha! What’s life without a little bit of danger? 😬

      5. Jay Bleu Avatar

        In the words of Maverick, “You’re right, Iceman… I AM dangerous.”

      6. Jay Bleu Avatar

        Are you new to blogging? I just recently found you but I am enjoying it. Hope you stay consistent

      7. WildHeart Avatar

        I gave up on blogging four years ago. This time, I’m here to stay! 😬❣️

      8. Jay Bleu Avatar

        Hope so! It sucks to make new friends on here and then they disappear =P

      9. WildHeart Avatar

        I’m committed to staying.❣️

      10. Jay Bleu Avatar

        Woohoo 🙂

        But can you ever really trust a Wild Heart?

      11. WildHeart Avatar

        Always! ❣️

      12. Jay Bleu Avatar

        Haha, great!!!

      13. Jay Bleu Avatar

        #WordPressLovin

      14. Jay Bleu Avatar

        how long can this thread go on?

      15. WildHeart Avatar

        As long as you wish! 🤗

      16. Jay Bleu Avatar

        🤪 I run out of things to say

      17. Jay Bleu Avatar

        LOLz – you know comments boost a posts exposure on WordPress

      18. WildHeart Avatar

        I had no idea. But thank you!! Guess our conversation is doing this post good. 😅💕

      19. Jay Bleu Avatar

        ya maybe we can set a record. Is there a limit??? 😉

      20. WildHeart Avatar

        I don’t think there is a limit. But we’ll run out of things to talk about. 😅

      21. Jay Bleu Avatar

        I already did a few times but somehow it keeps going

  13. J Avatar

    Apt picture, perfect title, lovely choice of words.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear. Your appreciation means so much to me! Keep reading, take care & stay safe! ❣️💕

      1. J Avatar

        My pleasure.

  14. parikhit dutta Avatar

    Beautifully composed.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Parikhit! 🙈❣️

  15. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

    Great twist at the end.

    The poem starts out beautiful, romantic and meditative.

    And then the hand grabs the narrator from the sea.

    And was the hand possibly one’s mischievous nephew …. or a serial killer with a chainsaw waiting on the beach?

    It’s left up to the reader to imagine.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Hehe… Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it. 💕💕 🙈 Take care & stay safe! ❣️

  16. -Eugenia Avatar

    I love how you wove this and then added the dynamic finale. Brilliant piece and thank you so much for participating.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you Eugenia for the amazing prompt! ❣️❣️💕💕 I’m so glad you enjoyed it. 🙈🤗🤗🤗😘

  17. SumitOfficial Avatar

    What a beautiful poem.
    I loved it.
    I’ve recently recorded my love for the ocean in Hindi. I’ll put up on Instagram soon.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Sumit!
      You have such a beautiful voice. Your recitations give me goosebumps!! ❣️

      1. SumitOfficial Avatar

        That’s a big thing to hear from you, Shreya.

        Tonight, I’m gonna try something new with a couplet recital. I hope you like that ☺

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        I’ll definitely listen to it. ❣️

  18. firewordsblog Avatar

    Nice work. I wonder where the poem would go if the hand pulled you out further into the sea or even down below, way down into the deep?

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Maybe I’d turn into a mermaid and rule the underwater life. 😍😍😍

  19. The Mermaid from the Mountains – Wild Scared Crazy Avatar

    […] very dear friend and a fellow blogger wrote this in response to my poem The Call of The Sea. He once asked me, “What would happen if the hands pulled me into the ocean instead?” […]

  20. Gentleman Dave Avatar

    Oh, I did read this! Love it! Really! 💕

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Dave. 🙈🤗😘💕❣️❤️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Praveen! 🤗❤️💕😘

  21. Ricardo Legault Avatar

    Hey this is somewhat of off topic but I was wanting to know if blogs use WYSIWYG editors or if you have to manually code with HTML. I’m starting a blog soon but have no coding knowledge so I wanted to get guidance from someone with experience. Any help would be greatly appreciated!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Heyy, you don’t need coding to start a blog.

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