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Don’t Fade My Friend, Just Go

“I’ll fade slow,” you promised,
And that sliced my heart in two.
It felt like you pulled a bow,
And the sharpest arrow pierced my core.

 
While lies are sour and truth bitter,
This honesty of yours has me shaken.
Don’t take me wrong dear friend,
I truly appreciate the upfront truth.

 
Dear friend, I don’t need your mercy,
Don’t fade slow, just go.
I don’t think I can ever bear,
Losing you in bits in pieces.

 
So, sever the ties and fly high,
I wish you all the joy.
And if you want to return,
My heart stays open.

Featured image by: Free-Photos from Pixabay

Responses

  1. Mohamad Toutounji Avatar

    This was a true masterpiece!!
    It’s full of emotions and love and it was so passionate
    Way to go

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear. Your appreciations always make me so very happy! 🙈🙈😘😘😘

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Mohamad Toutounji Avatar

        Aww you are most welcome dear
        You are so talented and amazing
        ❤️🌹🥰

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        So much appreciation… I’m blushing now! 🙈🙈😂

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      3. Mohamad Toutounji Avatar

        You are more than welcome my dear
        🥰🥰🌺

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      4. WildHeart Avatar

        🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘💕💕❣️

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  2. Bharath Upendra Avatar

    Hahahah! You decided to Post this now??

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Haha… Laziness hit me! 🤪

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      1. Bharath Upendra Avatar

        Don’t imitate my laziness please

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        You dipped me in your laziness so badly, now I’m lazier than you!

        Like

      3. Bharath Upendra Avatar

        You better get out of it. Ispe sirf mera haq hai.

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      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Haha… Try to get me out of it. I dare you. 😝😝😝

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      5. Bharath Upendra Avatar

        Don’t challenge me. 😏

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      6. WildHeart Avatar

        I just did! 😬

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      7. Bharath Upendra Avatar
    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much! 💕

      Like

  3. chicky1968 Avatar

    That was so endearing and loving, but sad. I can feel your pain and loss. Thank you for sharing it with us. 🙂

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear! I’m really happy you liked it. Sending you loads of love! ❣️💕

      Like

      1. chicky1968 Avatar

        Ahh thank you Heart. I appreciate that, and you’re welcome. Take care and stay safe and healthy. 🙂

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        🤗🤗😘😘💕💕❣️❣️❤️💖

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  4. Untold Stories Avatar

    Good post Shreya.
    I thought you wanted her to go unless in the last line you said you’ll wait for her if she wants to return.
    You did Poetic Justice here..
    Sending love to a poetic genius🤗🤗♥️♥️

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Your comments always make my heart warm Rashmi! 💕❣️ Thank you so much! 🤗🤗😘😘😘💕💕❣️❣️❣️❤️❤️

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  5. tanaka_tkzy Avatar

    Masterpiece overthere!

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much!! 🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘😘

      Like

  6. Era Singh Avatar

    Nice poem 😊

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Era. Sending you loads of love! ❤️❤️❤️

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      1. Era Singh Avatar

        Stay safe and stay healthy 💙

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        You too stay safe and healthy! Take care. 🤗🤗😘😘💕💕💖💖

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  7. thebibliophilewriter Avatar

    Wonderful piece!! Reminded me of my bestie, since we haven’t spoken for long and reading your poem felt like it was us drifting apart.
    Wonderful post!!👍👍

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear. I’m so glad you could relate it this, and I hope you guys don’t drift apart. Much love. 🤗🤗😘😘❣️❣️💕💕❤️

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      1. thebibliophilewriter Avatar

        Thnx for your lovely wishes. Stay safe💕💕😊😊

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        You too stay safe! Take care. 💕💕💖💖

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  8. H. R Phoenix, Author Avatar

    That was…. Powerful! Sad also.
    Seriously, I’m getting curious now, how are you not a celebrity yet???? 😃 🤗😅💕

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Haha … Thank you so much! This is over the top flattery! 😝😝😝🙈🙈😘😘

      Liked by 1 person

      1. WildHeart Avatar
  9. Tanya Sheik Avatar

    Beautiful!

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much! 💕

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      1. Tanya Sheik Avatar

        You’re welcome. 💖

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  10. Brad Osborne Avatar

    A masterful and beautiful poem, Shreya! There is such devotion and love wrapped in the pain of anticipated loss. The strong emotions you provoke are unavoidable. It is amazing to watch your talent grow and be appreciated by so many people. So proud of you!!! As always, with much love! ❤❣🥰😘💕

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Brad. Every comment of yours is such a strong push in my creative journey. You’ve been such an amazing support. Loads and loads of love to you! 🤗🤗😘😘❣️❣️❤️❤️💖💕

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  11. Harsh Avatar

    You never know when someone really fades away slowly!

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Sadly! 😕😕😕

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  12. Kaylen Avatar

    This was so beautiful. You did an amazing job expressing emotional turmoil in this poem. Loved it so much🌸

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Kaylen. Have a beautiful day! 🤗🤗😘😘💕💕💖💖❤️❣️

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  13. Amartya Avatar

    Beautiful 😍

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thanks a lot Amartya! 🤗😘💕

      Like

  14. Tushara Olivia Avatar

    It’s emotionally beautiful. Well penned one🤩👍

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thanks a million Tushara! So glad you liked it! 🙈🤗🤗😘😘💖💖

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  15. forresting365 Avatar

    This is really lovely. Thank You. 🙂

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      I’m so glad you liked it! 🙈🙈🙈🤗😘😘💕💖

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      1. forresting365 Avatar

        🤗❤️😊

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        🤗💖😇

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  17. Prutha Pimpalgaonkar Avatar

    This was so well written! Keep it up 💜💜

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thanks a lot dear. So glad you liked it! 🤗🤗😘😘💕💕💖💖❣️❤️

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  18. Ramyani Bhattacharya Avatar

    This is a very nicely written poem, touched my heart! Keep it up dear and take care!❤️

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Ramyani! You’re appreciation means so much to me. I’ll definitely keep writing, I hope you keep reading. Sending you loads and loads of love! ❤️

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      1. Ramyani Bhattacharya Avatar

        Sure! Your blog is amazing! Do visit my blog too. Lots of love!Take care!❤️

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        I definitely will! 🤗🤗😘❣️💕💖

        Like

  19. Gentleman Dave Avatar

    So sad, dear wild heart. I only hope he sees how wonderful you are. ❤🤗😘

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Dave! 😬🤗😘 Don’t be sad, most of my poems are fictional. 😝🤪

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      1. Gentleman Dave Avatar

        Haha, that’s great! What an imagination you have! 👍😉

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Thank you! 😬🤗😘😘❤️😉

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      3. Gentleman Dave Avatar

        I love how no matter what comments we make, they always turn into 😘😘🤗🤗💋💋

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      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Haha… Cause we’re always filled with so much love… 🤪🤪

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      5. Gentleman Dave Avatar

        Haha, you know it, ❤

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      6. WildHeart Avatar

        🤪🤪🤪

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  20. Jay Bleu Avatar

    Better to just rip the bandaid off quickly. . .

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Yeah… 💔

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      1. Jay Bleu Avatar

        Heartbreaks hurt so much. . .

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Truly does!

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  21. sachins21 Avatar

    Don’t fade……………
    Just go.
    It got me.

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      I’m so glad it got you!! Thank you so much dear. I hope to keep writing posts that gets to you. Loads of love! 🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘😘❣️💕💖❤️

      Liked by 1 person

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Abhishek! I’m really very happy that you liked it. 🙈🤗💕

      Like

      1. abhishekghoshsite Avatar

        Welcome 😇😇 😇

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        🤗🤗💕

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      3. WildHeart Avatar

        😬😬

        Like

  22. ruchiabhisikta Avatar

    Hey wildheart! why have you written this! In fact why did i read it! I don’t want to cry now, but i can’t escape from clutch of emotions now😢😢

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      I’m so so so sorry dear, I really didn’t want to make you cry. 🙈💔😭😭😭😭

      Like

  23. parikhit dutta Avatar

    Sometimes ripping off a band-aid is so much better than slowing letting it peel apart

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Truee! 💔😕

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  24. Roshni Avatar

    Truly beautiful and so relatable. May nothing fade the beauty of your words. I’m glad I came across your blog.

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Roshni. This means a lot to me!! So glad you liked it. Keep reading. 🤗🤗❤️💖

      Like

  25. Navin Avatar

    I can so much relate to it…..thx for sharing ❤️💙

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    1. WildHeart Avatar

      I’m feel so sad that you could relate to this. I hope you’re okay. Take care dear. And thank you so much for your sweet comment! ❤️❤️❤️

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      1. Navin Avatar

        I’m more than ok….it’s just your poem connects to people…at different levels

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      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Thank you so much dear! ❤️❤️💖💖💕💕❣️❣️

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  26. gldn2th Avatar

    Your word art is so exceptional and emotional, I have to limit my self to 2-3 posts a day, (if that is, I want to maintain control of my emotions throughout the day). Thank you yet again for another wonderful poem.

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    1. Shreya Joshi Avatar

      Your words give me tears of joy. Thank you so much!! You always bring a smile to my face. You’re such an amazing person. Have a super duper awesome day. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

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      1. gldn2th Avatar

        Thank you for your kind reply, I value your opinion more than the consensus opinion of those around me who think I’m a grizzly bear. heh heh

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      2. Shreya Joshi Avatar

        People think, people talk… And when you don’t like what they are saying, stick your tongue out at them and blehhhh 🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘♥️♥️♥️♥️

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      3. gldn2th Avatar

        Heh heh, yes I know you are exactly correct. I love your clarity with truth, and I love the infusion of humor, it shows that, woven in among all your finer qualities, there is a grade A sense of humor.
        Your combination of poise, class and wisdom prove why you are such an excellent role model for younger generations, and for those others of us, you are a wonderful example to either learn from, or be reminded of certain things. Thank you for your specialness.

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      4. Shreya Joshi Avatar

        Damn!! You always know how to make me feel like I’m flying in the air. Thank you so much! 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Sending you loads and loads of love. ♥️♥️♥️♥️😬😬♥️

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      5. gldn2th Avatar

        Hmmm, yes, this is most uncanny and yet, wholly appropriate; “flying in the air” is the exact place I expect to find an angel.
        This explains your awesomeness; you and your gift are literally divine in nature.
        I don’t know why I didn’t see it before, but it makes so much sense. It is sooo clear to me now, and now that I have seen, I can’t unsee.
        I used to doubt the existence of angels, but how can I now, with you as the best proof.

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      6. Shreya Joshi Avatar

        🙈🙈🙈🙈 awww… I don’t know what to say to this. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

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