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The Right Way to Mourn

Is there the right way to mourn,
The death of someone you love?
We’ve all seen it in movies,
Tears flooding down the eyes.
Sad music, rain and all things grey,
But real life doesn’t sway that way.Β 


Some people do cry their hearts out,
Heart-wrenching guttural cries,
While some just let outΒ  a few sobs,
In the memory of the ones that has gone,
Some could just stand and stare,
In utter denial, acting unaware,
Some could even laugh out loud,
Upon the cruel joke faith just played.Β 


You see dear, there are many ways,
For people to express their grief,
Each have their one story,
Losing a loved one isn’t easy.
Just because they do it differently,
You don’t hold the right to judge.
Cause there’s no right way to mourn,
The death of someone you love.Β 


Some could slit their own throat,
To reunite with the one that’s gone,
Some could cry for days and nights,
The melancholy swallowing them,
Some could act like nothings wrong,
Pretend the dead is still alive,
Some could turn to Jack Daniel’s,
Try and forget the fact so tragic
.
Everyone deals with it differently,
And there’s no perfect way.

Topic by: Bharath

Featured image by: Mandy Fontana from Pixabay

Responses

  1. Mohamad Toutounji Avatar

    This was amazing
    I actually posted a Q&A post so I would be honored if you ask me some questions on that post

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      I will definitely dear. Also, so sorry for reading your new story… Things have been pretty hectic lately. πŸ’•πŸ’•

      1. Mohamad Toutounji Avatar

        It’s okay dear
        You can take your time with it
        You are most welcome

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

  2. Lazarus Shatipamba Avatar

    I agree with Mohamad, this is an amazing post. One shouldn’t judge someone else just because they do something differently…

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Lazarus! πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ₯°β£οΈ So glad you liked it. ❀️

  3. Chetna Mittal Avatar

    A very unique idea to write on… you have quite aptly presented the various expressions of grief and gave a different outlook about them.Good job!πŸ˜πŸ’«

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Chetna! I’m so glad you’re enjoying my works. Have a beautiful day. πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  4. mitty Avatar

    Great work❣️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you mitty! πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ

  5. Vivek Avatar

    A brilliant topic and lines exploring every angle of the situation.
    Loved it 😊

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Vivek! πŸ’•πŸ’•β£οΈβ€οΈπŸ₯°

  6. Era Avatar

    very well expressed

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Era! πŸ’•πŸ’•

      1. Era Avatar

        most welcome πŸ’™πŸ€—

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

  7. Jay Bleu Avatar

    Mourning is so important… and to do it correctly. . .

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      But is there a correct way to do it?

      1. rishabh kumar Avatar

        I guess the right way is acceptance. 🌷

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        But accepting isn’t easy… And many people can’t…

      3. rishabh kumar Avatar

        it is never, but I guess we can’t control somethings, we want to.. be happy always, but can’t. want to stay young, but can’t, want to stay healthy… but… you know there are many examples… but mostly If I see life gets meaning when we have all these up and downs in life.
        If I cant control it, I try some ways.
        If nothing works, got to accept.
        acceptance isn’t easy,
        if you made up your mind
        and it is if can dare to decide.
        decisions demand actions
        actions want enthusiasm
        and without that my friend
        life is miserable to live.

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Trueee… You are a really budhiman person. 😬

      5. rishabh kumar Avatar

        πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚tang khichai kr rhi

      6. WildHeart Avatar

        Nahi nahi… Hum aap ke Tang Kyu khichenge? πŸ€ͺ

      7. Jay Bleu Avatar

        I think you need to give yourself a safe space to totally let it all out. and realize that this will just be for a time. and eventually you have to get over it

      8. WildHeart Avatar

        Maybe… 😭😭😭😭

  8. rishabh kumar Avatar

    Truly amazing topic by Bharath, and you carried it so well indeed. It’s really expressed in good ways.
    Some could cry for days and nights,
    Some could act like nothings wrong,
    indeed πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Rishabh! β€οΈβ€οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ

      1. rishabh kumar Avatar

        welcome buddy πŸ’

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  9. Rising Star Avatar

    Wow, that’s really awesome poetry. Keep it up.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thanks a million dear. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ€—β£οΈπŸ’•

      1. Rising Star Avatar

        My utmost pleasure πŸ’–πŸ€—

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

      3. WildHeart Avatar

        You too dear πŸ’•

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ’•πŸ’•

  10. Bharath Upendra Avatar

    My my! I’m so proud of you, girl!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      All thanks to you, for such a happy topic! πŸ€ͺ

      1. Bharath Upendra Avatar

        You know what I like. πŸ˜‚

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Maybe… 😝😝

  11. Anushk@ Avatar

    What else can be expected from himπŸ˜… such a happy topic.

    Now coming to your poem…
    Amazing Shreya…I don’t know how you do this. 😍
    Sometimes I don’t get any appropriate word to praise your work.πŸ’™πŸ’™

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Haha Anushka… I’m out of ways to thank you! πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ€—πŸ€—β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•

      1. Anushk@ Avatar

        As I have already told you….you don’t have toπŸ˜ŠπŸ’•

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        And you don’t have to find words to praise … The simple fact that you’re reading makes me feel so so so happy. You’re such an awesome person! ❣️

      3. Anushk@ Avatar

        Not as amazing as you Shreya πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•βœ¨ you are love.

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Let’s agree to disagree! πŸ€ͺ I’m horrible at taking appreciate too. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

  12. Roser Avatar

    Incredibly beautiful. Keep it up! β˜€οΈπŸ˜Š

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Roser! β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•πŸ₯°

  13. ankushmaster Avatar

    amazingly expressed

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Ankush! πŸ’•

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Haroon! πŸ’•

      1. Haroon Mirza Avatar

        You’re welcome

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  14. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    There’s no right way to mourn. Losing a loved one can be hard, really hard. Beautifully written, Shreya! β™₯️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Shweta. I’m really happy you liked it. β£οΈβ£οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ₯°πŸ₯°

      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        My pleasure, Shreya. β€οΈπŸ€—

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’•πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°β€οΈβ£οΈ

  15. Navin Avatar

    This is simply beautiful, Shreya….another strong & beautiful message….in such an artistic form…a reminder…there’s no right…there’s no wrong…you’re crazy talented….send me your autograph….by that, I mean your love ❀️πŸ”₯

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Navin. This means a lot to me. Especially coming from you. When I read your poems, I don’t even have words to say how awesome you are. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ₯°πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ Thank you so so so very much!! ❀️❀️❀️❀️

      1. Navin Avatar

        You are too kind…kinda one of a kind…but don’t you hide behind…the compliments you’ve been giving on my writings…I’m though humbled & deeply thankful, if you think of me high…I’m simply being me, trying to look into my own eyes β€οΈπŸ€—βœ¨πŸ’–

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Your eyes look wise! 😬

      3. Navin Avatar

        β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ–€πŸ’–

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  16. forgottenmeadows Avatar

    beautiful and moving…there is no right or wrong way for grief for it comes from a place that is true.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thanks a lot dear. I’m so glad you liked it. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ’•

  17. Harsh Avatar

    The correct way to mourn is how the individual wants to. Different individuals, different ways.
    Beautifully expressed!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Harsh! I’m so glad you liked it. How have you been?

      1. Harsh Avatar

        Okay, I guess. More bored lately, and don’t feel to do anything.
        How about you?

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Same here Harsh. All I want to do is sleep! πŸ€ͺ😴😴😴

      3. Harsh Avatar

        Me too. But I feel sleepy in the mornings, and it is the time to wake upπŸ˜‚

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Haha… Me too! 😬😬

  18. dutifulnotemotional Avatar

    Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, love your work! I’ve written poems with similar styles in the past, but I never knew what style it was called. Do you have any idea what genre this type of poem writing might be?

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      I don’t know, maybe free verse… Thank you so much for dropping by and appreciating my works. Loads of love to you. Keep writing! πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  19. The Bold Girl Avatar

    Such a lovely one, pretty soul!πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ Much love!❀️❀️❀️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear! β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

      1. The Bold Girl Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ€—

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ˜‡β˜ΊοΈ

      3. The Bold Girl Avatar

        Awww! I’m feeling bad for this tiny one!

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Haha… πŸ€ͺπŸ€ͺπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•β£οΈβ€οΈ

      5. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ’•β£οΈβ€οΈ

  20. singhpiyush6089 Avatar

    A very touching and moving post..!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Piyush! πŸ’•

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear! πŸ™ˆπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ’•β£οΈβ€οΈ

      1. Ojingiri Hannah Avatar

        I can’t get enough of your poems. I really like everything you’ve posted.

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Thank you so much dear. I really hope to keep creating stuff you like. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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