An eerie silence has trapped me,
All I can hear is my own echo.
Into a pit of darkness,
I feel the gravity pull me.
“Can anyone hear me?” I scream.
“Can anyone hear me ?” It reverberates.
“Heyy,” I scream once again.
It again echoes, my futile attempt.
I feel so lonely and cold in here.
Does anyone know, Iโm not there?
But in this world, does anyone care?
Somebody does, somebody must,
I keep repeating it on and on,
In desperation, I cling to hope.
The eerie silence teases me,
The darkness tries to embrace me.
“Nobody cares,” they tell me,
Again, and again, they remind me.
“I do,” I finally retort.
One person, I truly trust.
Featured image by: Mikke Strandberg from Pixabay
Well done๐๐
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Thank you so much, dear! โค๏ธ๐๐โฃ๏ธ
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Welcome sweet
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Spectacular splendid stunning writing… But meri post ap nhi padte ๐ that’s your wish. ๐. Keep writing stay blessed.
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Yaar, teen din se old written stuff post kr rahi hu… Fever thi yaar… You keep accusing me ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
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It’s your wish friend.. apko pasnd nhi aayi hogi meri writing. Jo pasnd aati h log whi to padhte hai.. it’s okay. Aap jaldi thek ho jaoge. Stay blessed and safe.
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Yaar, 102 *F thi… ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
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My good wishes to you… God sab acha kr denge.. don’t worry
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And you keep accusing me… ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
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Uske liye maafi chaunga .. ๐๐๐ฎ
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๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐
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๐ stay blessed
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Beautiful and indepth. The combo of silence and darkness is superb๐๐๐. Who is that one person who cares? Mother?
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Yeah, mommy is always there. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ And papa too! ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
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Or is it yourself or God?
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Meaning???
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That’s cool. I meant the ending lines ought to whom. “I do,โ I finally retort.
One person, I truly trust.” In these lines and I came to many conclusion for these lines. So just for clarification.๐๐
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Ohhh, you can interpret it in any way… ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐คช๐คช๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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That’s nice ๐คฉ๐
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So, how did you interpret it? ๐
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I felt like consider it as yourself. The most trusted love in this world is “Self love”๐คฉ๐. That’s superior. I don’t know what you actually meant about.
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I meant the same… It’s nice we think the same way! ๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐๐๐ โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐
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Ha ha. Happy that I could reach the correct conclusion.๐คฉ
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Haha! What other conclusions did you have in mind? ๐
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As I already told.. parents, God or yourself. That was it.
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Nicee… ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐
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Very well put!!! Ya can always count on “YOU”!!!
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Thank you so much, dear. So glad you liked it! ๐๐๐
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It was awesome!!! Keep up the good work, and keep “YOUR” head up!!!
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Silence beautifully personified
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Thank you so much, Haroon! ๐๐๐
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You’re welcome my friend stay blessed
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AMAZING! You’re very good at these!
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Thank you so much, dear. So glad you feel that way. โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐
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No problem! What’s your name by the way???
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I’m Shreya. Also, your blog’s link is broken. I can’t access it. ๐ญ
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Great name! Wait i’ll send it to you
https://crazyideaswithcrazyfun.wordpress.com/
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Thank you! ๐๐๐
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Any time โคโคโค
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Awesome….
You diddd ittt again! You captured the topic perfectly and your writing is out of this world
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Shreya, want some advice from the person that you’re always calling awesome which is a lie ๐๐๐ – Write a book and I’ll buy itttttttt!!!!!! Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please.
Wow, that took a long time to write! What was I saying again? Oh yeah, write that bookkkkkk!!!!!
Xxxx,
Your forever friend who doesn’t like it when you compliment her ๐๐๐,
Phoenix ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
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Why do you do this to me??? Replies to comments like this can only be a super duper tight hug, not virtual one…. ๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
And about the book, I’m too fickle minded… I did start a book after you told me to… I wrote two pages and, few days later, it didn’t feel like a nice book. So, no book. But I’ll definitely write one, and dedicate it to you! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ
Xxxx,
Your biggest fan and a forever friend!
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โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
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I thought emojis were my thing… Damn!!! You always put me in difficult situation…
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๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Amazing and deep!!!
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Thank you so much, Era! โค๏ธ๐
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No it’s wrong….. I care for you…. Cause then only I will get to read such beautiful works….. Btw this just simply awesome ๐๐ฅฐ
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Haha Komal… This is fictional… I know you care and I care for you… You just make my day so so so much better… Love you to the moon and back! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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๐๐ฅฐ
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๐ค๐
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A wonderful post once again! You do an amazing job expressing these things.
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Thank you so much, Kaylen! ๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐๐๐
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There’s a storm going outside , and there’s one going here. Really it’s a storm that you’ve taken today. How many poems did you post today 3?. And all of them amazing and unique!!It’s started to make me think now. Which storm is gonna win?
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Haha… I guess you read three yesterday. I just posted two yesterday though!!! How’s the storm there? I hope you’re safe!
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So beautiful and strong metaphor,Shreya!!
I was literally feeling as if you were stuck in the pit and I could feel the desperateness you had,and at the end I was like..THANKS GOD!!๐๐๐ซ๐ซ
Great work!๐๐๐
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Your words make me fly high, Chetna. Thank you so much! ๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ Have a beautiful day! ๐๐
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Ohh..it’s really a pleasure to know that,Shreya.๐๐
Luck and love to you.๐๐๐ซ๐ซ
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Luck and love to you too! ๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Shreya, if u do get time , I would be glad to have your feedback on my post. ๐ค๐ค๐๐๐
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Okay! I’ll definitely. โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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It’s beautiful Shreyaโจ
The truth is many are going to hurt you. You just got to find the ones worth suffering for..!!
Damn amazing..!!โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Thank you so much, Anushka! So glad you liked it. No, loved it! ๐๐๐ You always make my day so so so so so much better! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Oh yeah!!! You got this very right!๐
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Shreya is always right! ๐๐๐
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I won’t doubt that.๐
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You’re smart! ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฌ
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Learned from the best, The Captain!
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Haha… Don’t put me on a pedestal! ๐๐
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You are already on one.๐๐
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Join me… ๐ฌ
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I am more of the underground type ๐ฌ
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I’m diving into the underground with you! ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฌ
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Let me warn you, this place is quite dark and scary. Just like the pit you mentioned. You may never come out of it.
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I don’t mind… I just wanna explore the darkness… ๐คช๐
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Your choice.
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I know! ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฌ
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Dive into the underground. I am holding the door.
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Here I am. ๐
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Welcome. I hope you have a dark time.
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I hope you guide me well!
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It will be better if you self- explore. No one is meant to guide in such places.
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Okay. Bye!
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Bye. Wish you luck.
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Thanks!
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Heyo,shreya how can you do this every single time…I’m out of words…seriously…Its amazing dear…I feel when no one cares anything about us is when we realise our own importance….Keep writing Shreya…Love Love:)
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Thank you so much, Madhuri. I don’t know how do I thank you. You make me feel so so so happy. Loads of love to you. I hope you’re staying safe and well. ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ
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Yeah,staying safe darling…How about you…???
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I’m perfectly perfect. And super duper happy cause you keep showering me with so much love. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Awesome yr
เคเคฌ เคญเฅ เคฒเคฟเคเคคเฅ เคนเฅ เคเคฎเคพเคฒ เคเคพ เคฒเคฟเคเคคเฅ เคนเฅ
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๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ Thank you so much, Navneet! ๐๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐๐๐
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เคเคชเคเฅ เคชเฅเคฐเฅเคฐเคฃเคพ เคเคนเคพเค เคธเฅ เคฎเคฟเคฒเคคเฅ เคนเฅ
เคเคคเคจเฅ เคเฅเคฌเคธเฅเคฐเคค เคฐเคเคจเคพ เคเฅ เคฒเคฟเค
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Zindagi hi ek prena hai… ๐๐๐๐๐
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เคเค เคฐเคพเคเคผ เคเฅ เคฌเคพเคค เคฌเคคเคพเคเค, เคเคฟเคธเฅ เคเฅ เคฌเคคเคพเคจเคพ เคจเคนเฅเค ๐
เคเคชเคเฅ เคฒเฅเคเคจ เคเคฒเคพ เคธเฅ เคเคฒเคจ เคนเฅเคคเฅ เคนเฅ เคฎเฅเคเฅ เคเคญเฅ เคเคญเฅ ๐
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Jalan ko har kisi ko har kisi se hoti hai… Kabhi aap jalo, kabhi mei jalungi… ๐๐๐
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เคเคช เคธเคฐเฅเคตเคถเฅเคฐเฅเคทเฅเค เคนเฅ เคเคฐ
เคธเคฐเฅเคตเคถเฅเคฐเฅเคทเฅเค เคเฅ เคฆเฅเคธเคฐเฅเค เคธเฅ เคเคฒเคจเฅ เคเฅ เคเฅเคฏเคพ เคเคฐเฅเคฐเคค ๐
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Haha… I don’t even know how to reply to this… ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
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Amazingly penned!!!! And yes mom and dad are the one person who always cares for us โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Thank you so much, dear! ๐ค๐ค๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐ So glad you liked it! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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You have such a beautiful way of capturing those fleeting moments that hang in our lives like long years. The intensity and strength of the emotions you convey are powerful and rounded. We have all been to this placed where we are left to wonder what is our own reality. Well written, little one! ๐น๐โฃ
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Thanks a lot, Brad! So glad you think that way! ๐๐๐๐Sending you loads and loads of love! ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐ค๐๐โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ
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This gave me chills in a very good way. Thanks.
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Now you’re giving me super happy vibes. Thank you so much! ๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐
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Gr8
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Thank you so much! ๐ค๐
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Spectacular!
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Thank you so much, Rashmi! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Wow! Absolutely incredible๐ This poem has an amazing rhythm to it and the message it carries is so strong and poeticโคโค๐น
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Thank you so much, Ishita. This means a lot coming from you. I really really adore your works. ๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐโฃ๏ธ๐๐๐โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐
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My pleasure๐
Thank you so much!๐นโค
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๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐โฃ๏ธ
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