Rain

As a drop of rain hit me,
Right on my lip,
I was numb.
Right there I froze.
It was like a drop of acid,
Corrosive, burning my lips.
Oh, how it reminded me,
Of our very first kiss.
How the rain approved,
As we sealed the deal.

 
The downpour began,
Drenching me from head to toe.
Every drop was caustic,
Burning me to the very core,
I was in a purgatory,
Of memories of you and me.
I couldn’t move a step,
Nor find a shelter,
As all of it flashed before my eyes,
Prickling pain that never ends.

 
That midnight in your terrace,
How we danced in the rain,
And those hot cups of coffee,
As we enjoyed the monsoon,
And how we made love,
As pitter-patter sang to us,
Oh, how I loved the rain
Just a little less than you.
Now, every drop stings,
With memories of me and you.

Featured image by: Aleksandar Pasaric from Pexels

122 Comments Add yours

  1. ltsdo says:

    Wonderful poem dear…

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, dear. How’s your fitness regime going?

      Liked by 2 people

      1. ltsdo says:

        Amazimg…🤗

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      2. WildHeart says:

        That’s nice…

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      3. ltsdo says:

        Completed 100 followers today!!

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      4. WildHeart says:

        Add +1. Just followed you ! 😍

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      5. ltsdo says:

        Thnx dear!!!

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      6. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗🤗💕

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      7. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗🤗💕

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      8. ltsdo says:

        Now 109 followers.

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      9. WildHeart says:

        Do I get a party? 😍😍😍

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      10. ltsdo says:

        Yep why not..
        Tell me when and where?

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      11. WildHeart says:

        I’m in Nepal. Where are you?

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      12. ltsdo says:

        In india 😀😀

        Liked by 1 person

      13. WildHeart says:

        Nicee… Where in India?

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      14. ltsdo says:

        Haryana, rohtak

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      15. ltsdo says:

        My 2-3 friend are from nepal.
        Do u know hindi?

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      16. WildHeart says:

        I do… I stayed in India for 4 years 😂

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      17. ltsdo says:

        Where?
        I am from haryana..

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      18. WildHeart says:

        I was in Bangalore 😬

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      19. ltsdo says:

        Oo that’s great

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      20. ltsdo says:

        Now what’s about the party 🎊…

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      21. WildHeart says:

        I don’t know

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      22. ltsdo says:

        What is ur real name??

        Liked by 1 person

      23. ltsdo says:

        Nyc name 😍😍
        I have a college mate name shreya

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      24. ltsdo says:

        What r you studying right now??

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      25. ltsdo says:

        Thode der me bat krke aaisa lg rha h ki i know u very well…😊

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      26. WildHeart says:

        Haha… That’s cute!

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      27. ltsdo says:

        Do u have any social media handler…

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      28. WildHeart says:

        I have insta. Look for WILD SCARED CRAZY. 🤗

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      29. ltsdo says:

        Pleased to follow u on insta 😊😊

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      30. WildHeart says:

        ♥️♥️♥️

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      31. ltsdo says:

        Followed you on insta dear friend

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      32. ltsdo says:

        😍💙💙

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      33. ltsdo says:

        😊😊😍

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  2. Pitter patter raindrops!!
    ( I hear thunder. Oh, don’t you?)
    Beautiful btw. 😁

    Liked by 4 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      I did hear thunder, a yesterday! 😛😛😛
      Thanks! ♥️

      Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      🤗🤗💕💕❤️❤️😘😘

      Liked by 2 people

  3. Simon says:

    So beautiful ✨✍️👌 I wish it rains here now😉 Happy Weekend ✨💐

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, dear. 💕Where are you from?

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Simon says:

        I’m from Kanniyakumari, lives in Hot Chennai🥵. It’s better today. Still hot!!

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      2. WildHeart says:

        Nicee… I hope it rains too! 💕💕

        Liked by 1 person

      3. Simon says:

        Yes, I hope too, weather dept’s predicting it’s going to rain! Usually that will never happen as predicted, either machine or predictor getting old😂.🙄. Let’s see 😉

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      4. WildHeart says:

        Haha… Let’s see! Let me know if it rain, I’ll stay here being happy for you. 😂😂😂

        Liked by 1 person

  4. shadawss shadawss says:

    Good work

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much!!!❤️❤️❤️ How have you been lately?

      Like

      1. shadawss shadawss says:

        🤔🤔🤔 didn’t get you?

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      2. shadawss shadawss says:

        Second sentence

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      3. shadawss shadawss says:

        😀🤝

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  5. Very moving poem. Beautifully penned, Shreya

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Shweta! 💕💕♥️♥️💘💘❤️❤️ So glad you liked it! 💓😍😍🥰🥰🥰

      Like

  6. CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN! says:

    AWESOME POEM Shreya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      THANK YOU SO MUCH, Eshal!!! 💓💓💓💓❤️❤️❤️❤️

      Like

      1. CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN! says:

        No problem Shreya💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

        Liked by 1 person

      2. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗💓💓

        Like

  7. Silver Stone says:

    Lovely poem as always! 👏🏼👏🏼

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, dear! 💕💕💕

      Liked by 1 person

      1. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗💕💕

        Liked by 1 person

  8. Wonderful.. 😍😍😍
    I love the rain!!!!!!!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️

      Liked by 1 person

      1. WildHeart says:

        ♥️♥️♥️

        Liked by 1 person

  9. Refreshing and nostalgic one Shreya 😍❤️

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      🙈🙈🙈🙈 So glad you liked it Tushara! Thanks a bunch! 💓💓💓💓💓🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘

      Liked by 1 person

  10. Harsh says:

    So beautiful!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Harsh! ❤️❤️❤️

      Liked by 1 person

  11. “Oh how I loved the rain, Just a little less than you” such a romantic line💞, it was raining here just yesterday but there was nothing so romantic about it😂, it was furious.

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Haha … Romance is all in the mind, dear. You could be walking in the middle of a dessert and still make it seem romantic… 😛😛😛😛 Like I miss you more than every grain of sand here… 😂😂😂

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  12. Brad Osborne says:

    Exceptional poem, little one! You stretch a moment in the rain to reveal all the emotions of a well remembered love. I love the form and flow. Soft and gentle as the rain, but leaving you completely soaked with the feelings. Well done, Shreya! 🦄❤😘

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Brad! 🙈🙈🙈 Your words always leave me with extra good vibes to fuel my writing. 🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘💓💓💓♥️♥️♥️

      Liked by 1 person

  13. Kamya Seervi says:

    Someone got attacked by acid rain!

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Haha… Not so nice rain! 😂😂

      Liked by 1 person

  14. uzzawal1911 says:

    Amazing poem Shreya! I am learning a lot about poetry from bloggers such as you! Great going, keep it up 🙌

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Uzzawal! I’m humbled by your appreciation. Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️

      Liked by 1 person

  15. Era says:

    Wonderful 💕

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you, Era! ♥️

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Era says:

        Anytime, Shreya 💞💞💕💕
        Take care, have a good day ahead

        Liked by 1 person

      2. WildHeart says:

        You too dear. Have a beautiful day! 💕💕

        Liked by 1 person

  16. Wordzy says:

    So much emotion. Loved the imagery. Gave me a theatrical effect. Lively!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, dear! So glad you like it. 💕💕💕

      Like

  17. The words blend so nicely.

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Chole! 💕💕

      Liked by 1 person

  18. There is something so romantic about the rain. Kissing and more … as shared raindrops douse two lovers. 🤗🤗😘💖

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘💕💕💕

      Liked by 1 person

      1. 😘😘😘💋💋💋

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      2. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗❤️😘

        Liked by 1 person

  19. We have rain here. I could so connect to everything Shreya!
    It’s beautiful to read here♥️

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thanks a million, Rashmi. How have you been? 💕💕💕

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      1. I am good! How are you?

        Liked by 1 person

      2. WildHeart says:

        I’m good too! 🤗🤗😘😘❤️❤️💕💕

        Liked by 1 person

  20. Anushk@ says:

    It’s raining here Shreya 🤩
    And look what I am reading 💙💙💙💙

    Liked by 3 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Haha… I hope the rain is giving you all the nice feelings and not this one… 😂😂😂♥️♥️♥️

      Like

  21. The mention of acid rain takes me back to the 90s lol
    Beautifully written poem.

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      1. I remember hearing about acid rain all the time in school back then. It was considered a big ecological issue back then I guess.

        Liked by 1 person

      2. WildHeart says:

        While we’re in school, everything is so important. After that, everything still stays important, but the bills become more important. 😛

        Liked by 1 person

      1. WildHeart says:

        🤗😘😘❤️❤️

        Liked by 1 person

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