A Promise of Forever

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Don’t you see it,
How you slice me?
Your words sting,
And your actions kill.
On my heart,
You’re playing dart.
Or is it archery,
That you practice?
Now each scar hurt,
A little less every day.
While it’s exploding inside,
With all the dreams we’d seen.
Our happily ever after,
Our promises of forever,
Oh, how beautiful they were!
Now, I silently take all your brunt,
As you prove it’s all my fault.
Scars in my heart now laugh,
As you keep giving me new ones.
Yet I keep holding on,
To the promises we made.
I keep the forever part,
Sadly ever after, you gift.

Featured image by: 仔 饼 from Pixabay

69 Comments Add yours

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you, Harsh! 💕

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  1. Kamya Seervi says:

    Heartbreaking yet beautiful…

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Kamya! ♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘

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      1. Kamya Seervi says:

        You’re welcome!!

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      2. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗♥️♥️

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  2. Ishita Gupta says:

    So heartbreaking, but so sublime❤❤ The last two lines were the cherry on the cake😘😘 Fabulous Shreya!

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Ishita. Your comment has got me grinning wide like a monkey. 😂😂🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘♥️♥️♥️ So glad you liked it. 😘😘

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      1. Ishita Gupta says:

        Aw, I’m glad I made you so happy!
        Have a wonderful day❤😘

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      2. WildHeart says:

        You too have a wonderful day. Sending you loads and loads of love. 🤗🤗🤗😘😘♥️♥️♥️❤️❤️❤️❤️💓💓💕💕

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  3. Beautiful, profound and amazing as usual. Great job Shreya🥰❤️

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Tarushi. So glad you’re enjoyed it. ❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘

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      1. 😊😊😊 Keep writing like this!

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      2. WildHeart says:

        I hope so… 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘😘❤️❤️♥️♥️

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      3. Don’t worry, you will😇

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      4. WildHeart says:

        🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘

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  4. Beautiful rhythm. And these lines “Now each scar hurt,
    A little less every day.” Loved these lines very much, especially it’s symbolic significance.🤩❤️👍

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Tushara!!! So glad you liked it. I hope this stays just a poem and not a reality for any of us. 🤗🤗😘❤️❤️❤️♥️♥️♥️

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      1. That’s true. Let it be 😊

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      2. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗😘😘

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  5. uzzawal1911 says:

    Beautifully written, Shreya. I especially liked, ‘You’re playing dart.
    Or is it archery,
    That you practice?’
    Amazing choice of words! Well done 🙌

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Uzzawal!! 😍😍😍😍 So gald you liked it! 💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️♥️♥️

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, dear. Everytime you share my poem, I’m jumping with joy. 🙈🙈🙈❤️❤️❤️

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      1. grumpygorman says:

        (picturing one little WildHeart jumpin’ on the bed.. ) don’t bump anything now. 😉 Cheers! I am glad it brings you joy. Have a good one.

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      2. WildHeart says:

        Haha… Don’t worry!! 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘 Thank you so much. Sending you loads and loads of love. ♥️♥️♥️♥️

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      3. grumpygorman says:

        Happy writing. 🙂

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      4. WildHeart says:

        Happy writing to you too! 💓💓💓

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    1. WildHeart says:

      ♥️♥️♥️

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    1. WildHeart says:

      🤗🤗😘😘❤️❤️

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    1. WildHeart says:

      🤗🤗🤗💔💔💔😘😘😘

      Like

  6. Anushk@ says:

    This was wistful Shreya. Each and every line…having there own significance. This poetry of yours…has touched me. Specially these lines…
    Now each scar hurt,
    A little less every day.
    Beautiful ❤️❤️

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so so so so so much, Anushka. Love you to the moon and back. ♥️♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘😘

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      1. Anushk@ says:

        Love you more Shreya 😍😍🙈❤️❤️❤️✨✨

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      2. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗😘😘❤️❤️😍😍💓💓

        Like

      3. WildHeart says:

        I love you so so so much more! 😍

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  7. Brad Osborne says:

    You continue to amaze me! Well written! ❤❤❤ Much love! 😘

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Brad! ♥️♥️♥️🙈🙈🙈😘😘😘

      Liked by 1 person

  8. True Living says:

    This is beautiful 🤍

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️♥️

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Haroon Mirza says:

    Beautiful and touching

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Haroon! 💕💕

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      1. Haroon Mirza says:

        You’re welcome

        Liked by 1 person

      2. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗😘😘

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  10. CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN! says:

    GREAT POST!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Eshal! 💕💕

      Liked by 1 person

      1. CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN! says:

        No problem Shreya!!!!

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      2. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗😘😘♥️♥️

        Liked by 1 person

  11. aarzu says:

    Painful words quotes with true and pure feelings… 💔
    Well penned ❣️

    Liked by 2 people

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, aarzu! ♥️♥️♥️🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘

      Liked by 1 person

      1. aarzu says:

        You’re most welcome
        😘😊😘🤗😘🤗

        Liked by 1 person

      2. WildHeart says:

        🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️

        Liked by 1 person

  12. Wow but why it was sad.
    Write something where there is positivity. I wanna read it!

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    1. WildHeart says:

      Well, that’s hard 😂😂 but I’ll try 💓💓😘🤗

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      1. Nothing’s hard for Shreya. She can write anything and everything!

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      2. WildHeart says:

        Haha Rashmi! I tried really really hard, came up with something that includes happy. But it isn’t happy. I hope you like it. I’ll try and post something with loads of positivity soon. I promise. ❤️

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      3. I am gonna check that soon.
        Thank you Shreya ♥️

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      4. WildHeart says:

        🙈🙈🙈♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘

        Like

  13. Navin says:

    Beautiful lines, Shreya….❤️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Navin! ♥️

      Liked by 1 person

  14. Bryan Wagner says:

    What came up is I have lots of scars. But, they make me who I am today. I really appreciate this post. Thanks.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. WildHeart says:

      Awww…. Bryan! You made my day. So glad you liked it. ♥️♥️♥️

      Liked by 1 person

  15. Beautifully written, Shreya!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. WildHeart says:

      Thank you so much, Shweta! ❤️❤️❤️

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      1. My pleasure 😊

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