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The Girl From The Darkside

Thunder gurgled and the rain splattered;
People, animals, birds, all cowered,
Even the moon, was nowhere to be seen.
And there, in the darkness, she gleamed.
Unafraid she trotted through the darkest night,
Thunderstorm welcomed her with all his might.
“Oh you little frail girl, come back home and hide,”
Wise words were passed by the wizards of light.
“Darkness is not something that you cherish,
Rain makes you sick, better stay nourished.”
They tried keeping her safe and sound,
In the Kingdom of light, she felt bound.Β 
They used their arrows and their swords,
Anything to keep her from the dark world.Β 
But eachΒ  slash on her skin, each streak of blood,
She enjoyed them all, viscous crimson she adored.
Finally, she escaped to the realm of darkness,
She shed her mask and her clothes.
It’s in the light, where she had to hide,
In the darkness, there is no one to witness.
Hailstones and thunderstorms, all things dark rejoiced,
And the moon slowly waned and went back to hide.
The creatures of light, couldn’t believe their eyes,
They asked, “Who’s that girl? Is she gonna die?”
She heard all the whispers, and she simply smiled.
She was a girl born on the rainiest no moon night.
When the moon hid and heaven cried,
That’s when she first opened her eyes.

Featured image by: Enrique Meseguer from Pixabay

Responses

  1. Mohamad Toutounji Avatar

    Another outstanding poem by the amazing Shreya
    Way to go girl

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, dear! Truly means a lot to me. β™₯️β™₯οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

      1. Mohamad Toutounji Avatar

        You are most welcome dear

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’•πŸ’•

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you! πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

      1. bejamin4 Avatar

        Welcome πŸ™‚

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ’•

  2. Bharath Upendra Avatar

    The girl is gonna die πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    1. WildHeart Avatar
      1. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

  3. akshita1776 Avatar

    Woah!
    Awesome one!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Akshita! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

      1. akshita1776 Avatar

        My pleasureπŸ€—

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  4. Ashee Asiwal Avatar

    Amazing poem as usual 😍…
    And how r you? Took 6-7 days break??

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Ashee. I won’t be posting daily for a while, I guess. Maybe once a week, or even less. I’m fine. How are you? β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

      1. Ashee Asiwal Avatar

        Oh ok πŸ‘πŸ‘
        I’m fine too

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’•πŸ’•

  5. Ladysag77 Avatar

    Beautifully expressed πŸ’–

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

  6. Era Avatar

    Wow πŸ’›

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Era! β™₯️

      1. Era Avatar

        πŸ’™πŸ€—

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ’•

  7. Harsh Avatar

    Fantastic!!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Harsh! β™₯️

  8. shankjoejoe Avatar

    πŸ’―%πŸ–€

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      πŸ€—πŸ€—β™₯️β™₯️

  9. Brad Osborne Avatar

    Beautifully dark and enchanting. I love the rhyme scheme and tantric flow of this. I love the juxtaposition of not needing to hide in the dark. Well written, little one!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Brad! So glad you loved it. πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜ Truly means a lot to me. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️ Your comments always push me to create something new. πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  10. theweesmirk Avatar

    Incredible piece!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, dear! β™₯️

  11. Ishita Gupta Avatar

    WOW WOW WOW!!!! This was absolutely fantastic, wonderful, superb🀩🀩🀩 especially the last two lines….
    “When the moon hid and heaven cried,
    That’s when she first opened her eyes.”
    Love this pieceπŸ’žβ£
    Love and hugsβ™₯️β™₯️
    IshitaπŸ’—

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Ishita. It truly means a lot to me. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜ Hugs and love to you. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️ So glad you liked it. πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ Thanks a million! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

      1. Ishita Gupta Avatar

        My absolute pleasure!!!!πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’—πŸ’—β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯οΈπŸŒΊπŸŒΊπŸ’ž

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’•πŸ’•

  12. CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN! Avatar

    You are on FIRE shreya ❀❀❀

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Eshal! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’• Loads of love! ❣️❣️❣️❣️

      1. CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN! Avatar

        No problem Shreya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
        You too!

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  13. Fatima Mo Avatar

    This one is a very good one wow I really loved it.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Fatima! Truly means a lot to me. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

      1. Fatima Mo Avatar

        Omg my dear ❀️❀️❀️ you are welcome my love. I actually really loved this post, keep up the good work. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ I’m so very glad you loved this. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

  14. -Eugenia Avatar

    Wow, Shreya! One of your best! ❀️ 🧑 πŸ’› πŸ’š

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Eugenia! β™₯οΈπŸ’—πŸ’•β£οΈ

      1. -Eugenia Avatar

        My pleasure!

  15. Vanya Rajwar Avatar

    I loved the dark elements of the poem, specifically. Quite enticing.
    The last few lines felt like the night I was born on. On the rainiest day of August that too, a new moon night.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Vanya! Cheers to us August borns! πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ’• And happy birthday in advance. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

      1. Vanya Rajwar Avatar

        Ah Yess!! I guess a lot of Creativity was born in August!! Cheers and Happy Birthday in advance to you too!!! :* :* :* ❀ ❀ ❀

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ€—β™₯️β™₯οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•

      3. Vanya Rajwar Avatar

        ❀ ❀ ❀

  16. Lia Avatar

    Wow!!! This gave me tingles. That doesn’t happen that often. Kudos!!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Awwww…. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯° Thank you so much, Lia! Truly means a lot to me. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

      1. Lia Avatar

        Hugs to you WildHeart. :))) β€οΈπŸ€—πŸŒ»πŸŒ·πŸ™ŒπŸ‘―β€β™‚οΈπŸ’«πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ’—

  17. Chetna Avatar

    This girl is freaking gutsy! Lover of darkness!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Beautifully written, Shreya.πŸ’œβœ¨πŸ˜‰

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Chetna! πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ’•β£οΈβ£οΈ

  18. Aradhana Singh Avatar

    Hey dear I am starting English poetry too why don’t u read and appreciate or guide me🧑

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Sure! However, I won’t be much active for a few weeks or even months. I’ve reduced posting too. So sorry. But I’ll definitely check it out. Loads of love to you. Keep writing. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

      1. Aradhana Singh Avatar

        Thnks dear🧑🧑🧑🧑

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Hey… I can’t reach your blog. It shows protected…

      3. Aradhana Singh Avatar

        Oh!yupp now its public dear❀❀u can reach at mine also

  19. Aradhana Singh Avatar

    Lots of loveβ™₯️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Lots of love to you too! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

  20. wearetheauctores Avatar

    loved this ❀

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

  21. Nawazish Avatar

    Beautifully written!!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

  22. razarandomthoughts Avatar

    Exquisite piece of work. Impressed thoroughly. Looking forward to more poetry from your end.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, dear! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

  23. capablechloe1 Avatar

    What an amazing poem!

  24. SIMRAN TOTLANI Avatar

    Deep,intense and awesome poem.Loved this poem.
    Good job.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Simran. So glad you loved it. πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

  25. b_oraa Avatar

    Loved it πŸ˜€

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, dear! β™₯️β™₯️

  26. The Eclectic Contrarian Avatar

    If you fall into the sky
    In the middle of the night
    What would catch your fall?
    The darkness?
    Or the light?

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Or maybe you’d just keep falling and falling and falling into the tranquil sky until the end of time. πŸ˜¬πŸ™ˆ

      1. The Eclectic Contrarian Avatar

        Lol!!!! Your poem kind of inspired that…. but there you go taking a step further lol!

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Haha! Thank you so much. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

      3. The Eclectic Contrarian Avatar

        You’re welcome!

        I won’t keep you. I could keep on reading and talking all day.

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        I used to do that a few months ago. Idk, what happened after that. Kinda miss the more energetic and productive version of me . πŸ™ˆ

      5. The Eclectic Contrarian Avatar

        We all get a little burnt out every now and then. I definitely feel burnt out. I just stick around and read blogs (how I found your’s) I like meeting people and encouraging those who have a knack for writing.

      6. WildHeart Avatar

        It’s not that I don’t write these days. I do. But I really don’t find anything worth posting. And sometimes I start a piece and never complete.
        Thank you so much for sharing what you do when you feel burnt out. I really needed it. β™₯️β™₯️

      7. The Eclectic Contrarian Avatar

        It’s coming understood!

        What helps me is reading random blogs. Ordinary people have awesome testimonies. And there’s some pretty influential writers out there.

        I’m sorry if I’m holding you up or bothering you.

      8. WildHeart Avatar

        You’re not holding me up or bothering me. It’s nice talking to you. πŸ€—πŸ€—

      9. The Eclectic Contrarian Avatar

        Awesome!

      10. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’•

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