Thunder gurgled and the rain splattered;
People, animals, birds, all cowered,
Even the moon, was nowhere to be seen.
And there, in the darkness, she gleamed.
Unafraid she trotted through the darkest night,
Thunderstorm welcomed her with all his might.
“Oh you little frail girl, come back home and hide,”
Wise words were passed by the wizards of light.
“Darkness is not something that you cherish,
Rain makes you sick, better stay nourished.”
They tried keeping her safe and sound,
In the Kingdom of light, she felt bound.
They used their arrows and their swords,
Anything to keep her from the dark world.
But each slash on her skin, each streak of blood,
She enjoyed them all, viscous crimson she adored.
Finally, she escaped to the realm of darkness,
She shed her mask and her clothes.
It’s in the light, where she had to hide,
In the darkness, there is no one to witness.
Hailstones and thunderstorms, all things dark rejoiced,
And the moon slowly waned and went back to hide.
The creatures of light, couldn’t believe their eyes,
They asked, “Who’s that girl? Is she gonna die?”
She heard all the whispers, and she simply smiled.
She was a girl born on the rainiest no moon night.
When the moon hid and heaven cried,
That’s when she first opened her eyes.
Featured image by: Enrique Meseguer from Pixabay
Another outstanding poem by the amazing Shreya
Way to go girl
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Thank you so much, dear! Truly means a lot to me. ♥️♥️🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘
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You are most welcome dear
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🤗🤗💕💕
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Wowza!
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Thank you! 🙈🙈🙈
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Welcome 🙂
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🤗💕
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The girl is gonna die 😂😂
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Whyy? 😱
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Because blehh
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🥺🥺🥺🥺
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Woah!
Awesome one!
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Thank you so much, Akshita! ♥️♥️♥️
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My pleasure🤗
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💕💕💕
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Amazing poem as usual 😍…
And how r you? Took 6-7 days break??
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Thank you so much, Ashee. I won’t be posting daily for a while, I guess. Maybe once a week, or even less. I’m fine. How are you? ♥️♥️♥️
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Oh ok 👍👍
I’m fine too
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Beautifully expressed 💖
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Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️
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Wow 💛
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Thank you so much, Era! ♥️
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💙🤗
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Fantastic!!
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Thank you so much, Harsh! ♥️
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💯%🖤
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🤗🤗♥️♥️
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Beautifully dark and enchanting. I love the rhyme scheme and tantric flow of this. I love the juxtaposition of not needing to hide in the dark. Well written, little one!
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Thank you so much, Brad! So glad you loved it. 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘 Truly means a lot to me. ♥️♥️♥️ Your comments always push me to create something new. 💕💕💕
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Incredible piece!
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Thank you so much, dear! ♥️
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WOW WOW WOW!!!! This was absolutely fantastic, wonderful, superb🤩🤩🤩 especially the last two lines….
“When the moon hid and heaven cried,
That’s when she first opened her eyes.”
Love this piece💞❣
Love and hugs♥️♥️
Ishita💗
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Thank you so much, Ishita. It truly means a lot to me. 🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘 Hugs and love to you. 🤗🤗🤗♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ So glad you liked it. 💕💕💕💕💕😍😍😍😍😍😍 Thanks a million! ♥️♥️♥️♥️
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My absolute pleasure!!!!🤗🤗💗💗♥️♥️♥️♥️🌺🌺💞
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🤗🤗😘😘💗💗💕💕
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You are on FIRE shreya ❤❤❤
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Thank you so much, Eshal! ♥️♥️♥️♥️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘💕💕💕💕 Loads of love! ❣️❣️❣️❣️
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No problem Shreya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You too!
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This one is a very good one wow I really loved it.
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Thank you so much, Fatima! Truly means a lot to me. ♥️♥️♥️
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Omg my dear ❤️❤️❤️ you are welcome my love. I actually really loved this post, keep up the good work. 🥰🥰🥰
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🤗🤗🤗😍😍😍😘😘😘💗💗💗❣️❣️❣️❣️ I’m so very glad you loved this. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
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Wow, Shreya! One of your best! ❤️ 🧡 💛 💚
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Thank you so much, Eugenia! ♥️💗💕❣️
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My pleasure!
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I loved the dark elements of the poem, specifically. Quite enticing.
The last few lines felt like the night I was born on. On the rainiest day of August that too, a new moon night.
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Thank you so much, Vanya! Cheers to us August borns! 🤗🤗😘😘💕💕 And happy birthday in advance. ♥️♥️♥️
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Ah Yess!! I guess a lot of Creativity was born in August!! Cheers and Happy Birthday in advance to you too!!! :* :* :* ❤ ❤ ❤
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🤗🤗♥️♥️💕💕
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Wow!!! This gave me tingles. That doesn’t happen that often. Kudos!!
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Awwww…. 🥰🥰🥰 Thank you so much, Lia! Truly means a lot to me. 🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘💕💕💕
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Hugs to you WildHeart. :))) ❤️🤗🌻🌷🙌👯♂️💫💕😘💗
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This girl is freaking gutsy! Lover of darkness!😂😂
Beautifully written, Shreya.💜✨😉
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Thank you so much, Chetna! 🤗🤗😘😘😘💕💕❣️❣️
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Hey dear I am starting English poetry too why don’t u read and appreciate or guide me🧡
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Sure! However, I won’t be much active for a few weeks or even months. I’ve reduced posting too. So sorry. But I’ll definitely check it out. Loads of love to you. Keep writing. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
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Thnks dear
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Thnks dear🧡🧡🧡🧡
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Hey… I can’t reach your blog. It shows protected…
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Oh!yupp now its public dear❤❤u can reach at mine also
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Lots of love♥️
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Lots of love to you too! ♥️♥️♥️
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loved this ❤
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Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️
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Beautifully written!!
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Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️
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Exquisite piece of work. Impressed thoroughly. Looking forward to more poetry from your end.
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Thank you so much, dear! ♥️♥️♥️
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What an amazing poem!
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Deep,intense and awesome poem.Loved this poem.
Good job.
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Thank you so much, Simran. So glad you loved it. 💝💝💝💝🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘
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Loved it 😀
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Thank you so much, dear! ♥️♥️
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If you fall into the sky
In the middle of the night
What would catch your fall?
The darkness?
Or the light?
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Or maybe you’d just keep falling and falling and falling into the tranquil sky until the end of time. 😬🙈
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Lol!!!! Your poem kind of inspired that…. but there you go taking a step further lol!
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Haha! Thank you so much. 🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘
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You’re welcome!
I won’t keep you. I could keep on reading and talking all day.
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I used to do that a few months ago. Idk, what happened after that. Kinda miss the more energetic and productive version of me . 🙈
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We all get a little burnt out every now and then. I definitely feel burnt out. I just stick around and read blogs (how I found your’s) I like meeting people and encouraging those who have a knack for writing.
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It’s not that I don’t write these days. I do. But I really don’t find anything worth posting. And sometimes I start a piece and never complete.
Thank you so much for sharing what you do when you feel burnt out. I really needed it. ♥️♥️
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It’s coming understood!
What helps me is reading random blogs. Ordinary people have awesome testimonies. And there’s some pretty influential writers out there.
I’m sorry if I’m holding you up or bothering you.
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You’re not holding me up or bothering me. It’s nice talking to you. 🤗🤗
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Awesome!
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🤗🤗💕
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YES.
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Beautiful
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