If I close my eyes tomorrow,
Will you wallow in sorrow?
Or will you just forget me,
My absence unnoticed?
Sometimes I wish you cared,
Sometimes I wish you were near,
But you were never mine,
I have no right to pine.
And as I wonder,
Will you even shed a tear,
If I close my eyes?
I realize…
I’m already deleted,
Your life perfected.
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Relatable, poignant. Nicely written.
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Thank you so much! 🥰🥰🥰🥰
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This really pulls at the heart, Shreya! We all know what it feels like to not be chosen and you have articulated it beautifully! Well done!
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Thank you so much, Brad!! For encouraging me from the very beginning of my blogging journey… Your words have always pushed me to keep writing. ♥️♥️♥️♥️
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It happens! It amazed me at how easily I got deleted from someone’s mind while I struggled! Beautifully penned
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Thank you so much, dear! It sucks to be deleted. How are you?
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Oh yes it sucks! I’m good Shreya.. how are you?
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I’m good too. ♥️♥️♥️💖💖💖
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When We Are Deleted
In A Way it is more
Room for Us
To Generate
A Hug As
There Are So
Many Who Will
Appreciate Unconditional
Love Who Only Breathes
Genuinely
This Way
With
SMiLes
To Give🤗🎶
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So true!! Wise words. Thank you so much. ♥️♥️♥️♥️ 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Pleasure all
Mine Shreya😊🤗🙌
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🤗🤗🤗💖💖💖
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😊🤗🎶
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We get replaced easily.
Even though it’s a question that you put in the end, will I be deleted? Somewhere you know the answer and it’s a yes.
Again a wonderful poem by you Shreya!🤗
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Thank you so much, Rashmi… ♥️♥️♥️ Being deleted sucks. 💔💔💔🥺🥺🥺 But yeah, it opens up place for people who actually matter. 💖💖💖
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Beautiful! I hope youre ok? xoxo
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I’m good dear. 🤗🤗💖💖 How have you been?
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Your poems have so deep emotions, sometimes they make me cry. You’re really an amazing writer.❤❤
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Awwww….. 🥰🥰🥰🥰 Thank you so much!! It truly means a lot to me. 💖💖💖💖
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Oh wow, this is a very special poem, i will remember this for the rest of my life, thank you.
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Damn!!! 🙈🙈🙈🥰🥰🥰🥰 Thank you so much!! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ This really means a lot to me. 💖💖💖💖 Loads of love!! 💗💗💗
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Love you forever my friend ❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Love you too! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️💖💖💖💖
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Nah definitely love you more lol ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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❤❤❤❤❤❤ love you forever my friend
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Hehe… 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
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❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
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You are beautiful and i love you ❤❤❤❤
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🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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Your the most beautiful woman in the world ❤❤❤ love ya forever
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Thank you so much! 🥰🥰
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Love you ❤
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♥️
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💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋
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❤
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♥️
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You will stay alive in your poems always.
There’s no way that you can delete a part of you in them and make us stop meeting you there.
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Hehe… Thank you so much, Chetna!! You’re the sweetest. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰💖💖💖💖💖
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💜💜
Sending love to you girl.🤗
Btw, I have one thing to ask you..
When I clicked on your reply to go to your comments section..
It said.. unable to retrieve this post.
Do you know how to fix this??
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I really have no idea…
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So sad…. Hard to ever really know how much you mean to someone. . .
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True… 💔💔💔💔
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The sad truth. Its like holding on to something which was never yours.
You have written this amazingly.
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Thank you so much!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰 So glad you like it. ♥️♥️♥️
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This is so relatable, seriously!
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I’m kinda sad you could relate. 🙈🤗🤗
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Oh no, you don’t have to. Gone is the past, I’m happy I’m with better meaningful souls around 😄
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That’s nicee… 🤗🤗🤗💖💖💖💖
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You have written it so beautifully. Everyone has a replacement these days!
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Thank you so much, dear. 🤗🤗🤗🤗💖💖💖💖♥️♥️♥️♥️
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