Deleted

If I close my eyes tomorrow,
Will you wallow in sorrow?
Or will you just forget me,
My absence unnoticed?
Sometimes I wish you cared,
Sometimes I wish you were near,
But you were never mine,
I have no right to pine.
And as I wonder,
Will you even shed a tear,
If I close my eyes?
I realize…
I’m already deleted,
Your life perfected.

Featured image by: dima_goroziya from Pixabay

52 Comments Add yours

  1. Relatable, poignant. Nicely written.

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      Thank you so much! πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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  2. Brad Osborne says:

    This really pulls at the heart, Shreya! We all know what it feels like to not be chosen and you have articulated it beautifully! Well done!

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      Thank you so much, Brad!! For encouraging me from the very beginning of my blogging journey… Your words have always pushed me to keep writing. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

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  3. HappySoul says:

    It happens! It amazed me at how easily I got deleted from someone’s mind while I struggled! Beautifully penned

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      Thank you so much, dear! It sucks to be deleted. How are you?

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      1. HappySoul says:

        Oh yes it sucks! I’m good Shreya.. how are you?

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      2. Shreya Joshi says:

        I’m good too. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯οΈπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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  4. When We Are Deleted
    In A Way it is more
    Room for Us
    To Generate
    A Hug As
    There Are So
    Many Who Will
    Appreciate Unconditional
    Love Who Only Breathes
    Genuinely
    This Way
    With
    SMiLes
    To GiveπŸ€—πŸŽΆ

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      So true!! Wise words. Thank you so much. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️ πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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      1. Pleasure all
        Mine ShreyaπŸ˜ŠπŸ€—πŸ™Œ

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      2. Shreya Joshi says:

        πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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      3. πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—πŸŽΆ

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  5. We get replaced easily.

    Even though it’s a question that you put in the end, will I be deleted? Somewhere you know the answer and it’s a yes.

    Again a wonderful poem by you Shreya!πŸ€—

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      Thank you so much, Rashmi… β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️ Being deleted sucks. πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί But yeah, it opens up place for people who actually matter. πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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  6. Carol anne says:

    Beautiful! I hope youre ok? xoxo

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      I’m good dear. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’–πŸ’– How have you been?

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  7. Your poems have so deep emotions, sometimes they make me cry. You’re really an amazing writer.❀❀

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      Awwww….. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯° Thank you so much!! It truly means a lot to me. πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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  8. Jackjones says:

    Oh wow, this is a very special poem, i will remember this for the rest of my life, thank you.

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      Damn!!! πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯° Thank you so much!! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️ This really means a lot to me. πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’– Loads of love!! πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

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      1. Jackjones says:

        Love you forever my friend ❀❀❀❀❀❀

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      2. Shreya Joshi says:

        Love you too! β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯οΈπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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      3. Jackjones says:

        Nah definitely love you more lol ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

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      4. Shreya Joshi says:

        πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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      5. Jackjones says:

        ❀❀❀❀❀❀ love you forever my friend

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      6. Shreya Joshi says:

        Hehe… πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

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      7. Jackjones says:

        ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

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      8. Shreya Joshi says:

        β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

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      9. Jackjones says:

        You are beautiful and i love you ❀❀❀❀

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      10. Shreya Joshi says:

        πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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      11. Jackjones says:

        Your the most beautiful woman in the world ❀❀❀ love ya forever

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      12. Shreya Joshi says:

        Thank you so much! πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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      13. Jackjones says:

        Love you ❀

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      14. Jackjones says:

        πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹

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  9. Chetna says:

    You will stay alive in your poems always.
    There’s no way that you can delete a part of you in them and make us stop meeting you there.

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      Hehe… Thank you so much, Chetna!! You’re the sweetest. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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      1. Chetna says:

        πŸ’œπŸ’œ
        Sending love to you girl.πŸ€—

        Btw, I have one thing to ask you..
        When I clicked on your reply to go to your comments section..
        It said.. unable to retrieve this post.
        Do you know how to fix this??

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      2. Shreya Joshi says:

        I really have no idea…

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  10. Jay Bleu says:

    So sad…. Hard to ever really know how much you mean to someone. . .

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      True… πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”

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  11. The sad truth. Its like holding on to something which was never yours.
    You have written this amazingly.

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      Thank you so much!!! πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯° So glad you like it. β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

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  12. Shaunak says:

    This is so relatable, seriously!

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      I’m kinda sad you could relate. πŸ™ˆπŸ€—πŸ€—

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  13. Shaunak says:

    Oh no, you don’t have to. Gone is the past, I’m happy I’m with better meaningful souls around πŸ˜„

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      That’s nicee… πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

      Liked by 1 person

  14. Nawazish says:

    You have written it so beautifully. Everyone has a replacement these days!

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    1. Shreya Joshi says:

      Thank you so much, dear. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

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