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Hitting the 180

Cold blanks approach us:
And it’s getting scary.
The silence, once used to be bliss,
Amidst our fiery passion,
Now it’s just stark cold,
Aftermath of our heated discussion
.
Β 
Oh dear, where did we go wrong?
When did we hit a 180?
Your beautiful brown eyes,
That held only love for me,
Now give me an icy stare,
Laced with pure rage, even hatred.

Β 
Your hands that touched me,
With the utmost tenderness,
Now land on me with such force,
That I lose consciousness.
When did you stop loving me?
Can we still be salvaged?

For NaPoRiMo Day Eight. We were required to use a line or even a word that stands out from tweet snippets.

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Responses

  1. Bharath Upendra Avatar

    This fictional too??

    1. WildHeart Avatar
      1. 𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑡 πŸŒ‹ Avatar

        I was wondering too, for a moment, since I read earlier about couples having difficulties being locked down together! I mean arguments etc, not necessarily abuse, although I know that has increased too.

      2. Bharath Upendra Avatar

        Great. Good one. πŸ˜…

      3. WildHeart Avatar

        Thank you so much Bharath! πŸ’•

  2. Bon Repos Gites Avatar

    Very powerfully expressed!!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear! πŸ™ˆβ£οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ€—

  3. short-prose-fiction Avatar

    Beautiful. Powerful. Bravo.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear. So sorry for not responding earlier. My notification system has some glitch, haven’t figured it out yet. Your appreciation means a lot to me. Thank you so much. Much love. ❀️

  4. Untold Stories Avatar

    Oh dear, where did we go wrong?
    When did we hit a 180?
    Your beautiful brown eyes,
    That held only love for me,
    Now give me an icy stare,
    Laced with pure rage, even hatred.
    Β 

    Your mind must be a terrific place, therefore your thoughts are intense……πŸ‘πŸ‘

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Rashmi! I’m humbled by your kind words! πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ’•πŸ’•β£οΈπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

      1. Untold Stories Avatar

        I am so fond of your writing I have talked about you in my recent blog…
        You should go to see it once…

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Thank you so so so much Rashmi. And did you know, most of your favourites are my favourites too. Seems like we have such a similar mind. Love you loads! β£οΈβ£οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’• Thank you for being my constant motivation! ❣️

  5. Untold Stories Avatar

    Thanks for the read

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      You may not have noticed, but I’m constant reader too. Maybe I’m slow, but I’ve been reading your works for a long time. And I love it. β£οΈπŸ˜πŸ’•

      1. Untold Stories Avatar

        This means a lot yaa…..a lot means a lot.❀️

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β£οΈπŸ’•

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Haroon! ❣️

      1. Haroon Mirza Avatar

        You’re welcome

  6. Brad Osborne Avatar

    Your subtle articulation of the pain is powerful. Spoken more in recognition than in fear, it allows the reader to install their own experiences and see themselves in a different light. Well written, dear friend! πŸ€—πŸ₯°β€

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Brad!! πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆβ£οΈ

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Indeed it is! πŸ˜”

  7. Navin Avatar

    I’m loving your writings…full of passion…you put your heart on them. This post shows beauty in sadness…πŸ’™

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      β£οΈπŸ’•

  8. Abhishek pathania Avatar

    Amazing poetry. Loved it

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much Abhishek! πŸ’•β£οΈ

  9. Aa'eedah Avatar

    “When did we hit a 180?
    Your beautiful brown eyes,
    That held only love for me,
    Now give me an icy stare,
    Laced with pure rage, even hatred.”

    Beautiful, poignant. β™₯️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. πŸ’•β£οΈβ€οΈ

      1. Aa'eedah Avatar

        β€οΈπŸ€—πŸ€“

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        ❣️❀️

  10. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    Beautifully penned! πŸ™‚

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you Shweta! πŸ’žβ£οΈπŸ˜˜

      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        Take care. πŸ™‚

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        You too. πŸ’žπŸ’žβ€οΈ Much love.

  11. Tone Avatar

    Very nicely done! I love the versatility in your writing! 😍

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much dear. I’m humbled by your appreciation! πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•β€οΈ

      1. Tone Avatar

        You’re very welcome! πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸŒŸβœ¨

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        πŸ™ˆπŸ’•πŸ’žβ£οΈ

  12. SumitOfficial Avatar

    I’m out of words now.
    How do you praise without words Shreya?

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Idk. That’s something only a master of words like yourself can figure out. πŸ˜…β£οΈβ€οΈ

      1. SumitOfficial Avatar

        Damn! Look who’s saying, believe me till now I only had one comrade blogger of mine, her name is Chandni Asnani.
        She is such a beautiful heart that she can rhyme anything and everything.

        I’ve been in touch with her since 2016 and after so many years you’re the second person whose poems I appreciate the most after Chandni.

        Believe me nothing could be better than this.

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Damn! This is such an honor. It’s feels as if a king took off his crown and put it on my head. πŸ˜…πŸ˜…β£οΈβ£οΈβ€οΈπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

      3. SumitOfficial Avatar

        You deserve that love. πŸ˜«πŸ™πŸ’“

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Thank you so much! πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

      5. SumitOfficial Avatar

        You should check out Chandni’s work and you’ll get to know why I say so. I guess you must have seen her around but here’s her site:

        https://twilightfirefly.com

      6. WildHeart Avatar

        She’s indeed amazing 😍

      7. SumitOfficial Avatar

        I told you ☺

      8. WildHeart Avatar

        Yes, you did. ❣️

  13. Ingramuniversal.com Avatar

    Great post! πŸ™πŸΎ

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much πŸ’•

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