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A Promise of Forever

Don’t you see it,
How you slice me?
Your words sting,
And your actions kill.
On my heart,
You’re playing dart.
Or is it archery,
That you practice?
Now each scar hurt,
A little less every day.
While it’s exploding inside,
With all the dreams we’d seen.
Our happily ever after,
Our promises of forever,
Oh, how beautiful they were!
Now, I silently take all your brunt,
As you prove it’s all my fault.
Scars in my heart now laugh,
As you keep giving me new ones.
Yet I keep holding on,
To the promises we made.
I keep the forever part,
Sadly ever after, you gift.

Featured image by: 仔 饼 from Pixabay

Responses

  1. Harsh Avatar

    Nice!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you, Harsh! 💕

  2. Kamya Seervi Avatar

    Heartbreaking yet beautiful…

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Kamya! ♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘

      1. Kamya Seervi Avatar

        You’re welcome!!

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        🤗🤗♥️♥️

  3. Ishita Gupta Avatar

    So heartbreaking, but so sublime❤❤ The last two lines were the cherry on the cake😘😘 Fabulous Shreya!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Ishita. Your comment has got me grinning wide like a monkey. 😂😂🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘♥️♥️♥️ So glad you liked it. 😘😘

      1. Ishita Gupta Avatar

        Aw, I’m glad I made you so happy!
        Have a wonderful day❤😘

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        You too have a wonderful day. Sending you loads and loads of love. 🤗🤗🤗😘😘♥️♥️♥️❤️❤️❤️❤️💓💓💕💕

  4. Tarushi Parashar Avatar

    Beautiful, profound and amazing as usual. Great job Shreya🥰❤️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Tarushi. So glad you’re enjoyed it. ❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘

      1. Tarushi Parashar Avatar

        😊😊😊 Keep writing like this!

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        I hope so… 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘😘❤️❤️♥️♥️

      3. Tarushi Parashar Avatar

        Don’t worry, you will😇

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        🙈🙈🤗🤗😘😘

  5. Tushara Olivia Avatar

    Beautiful rhythm. And these lines “Now each scar hurt,
    A little less every day.” Loved these lines very much, especially it’s symbolic significance.🤩❤️👍

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Tushara!!! So glad you liked it. I hope this stays just a poem and not a reality for any of us. 🤗🤗😘❤️❤️❤️♥️♥️♥️

      1. Tushara Olivia Avatar

        That’s true. Let it be 😊

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        🤗🤗😘😘

  6. uzzawal1911 Avatar

    Beautifully written, Shreya. I especially liked, ‘You’re playing dart.
    Or is it archery,
    That you practice?’
    Amazing choice of words! Well done 🙌

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Uzzawal!! 😍😍😍😍 So gald you liked it! 💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️♥️♥️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, dear. Everytime you share my poem, I’m jumping with joy. 🙈🙈🙈❤️❤️❤️

      1. grumpygorman Avatar

        (picturing one little WildHeart jumpin’ on the bed.. ) don’t bump anything now. 😉 Cheers! I am glad it brings you joy. Have a good one.

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Haha… Don’t worry!! 🙈🙈🙈🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘 Thank you so much. Sending you loads and loads of love. ♥️♥️♥️♥️

      3. grumpygorman Avatar

        Happy writing. 🙂

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        Happy writing to you too! 💓💓💓

  7. Charles Avatar
    1. WildHeart Avatar

      ♥️♥️♥️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      🤗🤗😘😘❤️❤️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      🤗🤗🤗💔💔💔😘😘😘

  8. Anushk@ Avatar

    This was wistful Shreya. Each and every line…having there own significance. This poetry of yours…has touched me. Specially these lines…
    Now each scar hurt,
    A little less every day.
    Beautiful ❤️❤️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so so so so so much, Anushka. Love you to the moon and back. ♥️♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘😘

      1. Anushk@ Avatar

        Love you more Shreya 😍😍🙈❤️❤️❤️✨✨

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        🤗🤗😘😘❤️❤️😍😍💓💓

      3. WildHeart Avatar

        I love you so so so much more! 😍

  9. Brad Osborne Avatar

    You continue to amaze me! Well written! ❤❤❤ Much love! 😘

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Brad! ♥️♥️♥️🙈🙈🙈😘😘😘

  10. True Living Avatar

    This is beautiful 🤍

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much! ♥️♥️♥️♥️

  11. Haroon Mirza Avatar

    Beautiful and touching

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Haroon! 💕💕

      1. Haroon Mirza Avatar

        You’re welcome

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        🤗🤗😘😘

  12. CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN! Avatar

    GREAT POST!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Eshal! 💕💕

      1. CRAZY IDEAS WITH CRAZY FUN! Avatar

        No problem Shreya!!!!

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        🤗🤗😘😘♥️♥️

  13. aarzu Avatar

    Painful words quotes with true and pure feelings… 💔
    Well penned ❣️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, aarzu! ♥️♥️♥️🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘

      1. aarzu Avatar

        You’re most welcome
        😘😊😘🤗😘🤗

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️

  14. Untold Stories Avatar

    Wow but why it was sad.
    Write something where there is positivity. I wanna read it!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Well, that’s hard 😂😂 but I’ll try 💓💓😘🤗

      1. Untold Stories Avatar

        Nothing’s hard for Shreya. She can write anything and everything!

      2. WildHeart Avatar

        Haha Rashmi! I tried really really hard, came up with something that includes happy. But it isn’t happy. I hope you like it. I’ll try and post something with loads of positivity soon. I promise. ❤️

      3. Untold Stories Avatar

        I am gonna check that soon.
        Thank you Shreya ♥️

      4. WildHeart Avatar

        🙈🙈🙈♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘

  15. Navin Avatar

    Beautiful lines, Shreya….❤️

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Navin! ♥️

  16. Bryan Wagner Avatar

    What came up is I have lots of scars. But, they make me who I am today. I really appreciate this post. Thanks.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Awww…. Bryan! You made my day. So glad you liked it. ♥️♥️♥️

  17. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    Beautifully written, Shreya!

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Shweta! ❤️❤️❤️

      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        My pleasure 😊

  18. Leif Price Avatar

    Ohh, I can feel that pain. That’s a well written, Shreya.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Leif. So glad you liked it. ♥️♥️♥️

  19. Shrutika Joshi Barve Avatar

    beautifully written and heart touching.

    1. WildHeart Avatar

      Thank you so much, Shrutika! ♥️♥️♥️

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